Thursday, 13 September 2018

At Point Blank by Vivaan Tinwalla


At Point Blank
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Table of Contents





Authors Note:
Hope you readers enjoy my book, and always give it thumbs up if you guys loved it and tell me what I can do to make my books better in the future.
Regards: Vivaan.T Author of At Point Blank
Chapter 1: Welcome To This Book I’m Quenchar Nice To Meet You

 Quenchar was in deep slumber, he heard a voice calling to him to get up. He just ignored straining to open his eye’s he looked at his clock which was on his side table. It was 3 minutes to 8 o'clock. Quenchar tried to rollover and get up but he fell off the bed. He tried to get up and go back to the bed but he was too lazy. He prefers to lie on the ground gazing at the celling

He is in the 7th grade. Quenchar is 5 foot 6 inches; he was one of the tallest boys in his class. He was 11 years old, but he looked way younger for his age. Quenchar was a fair complexion boy and hated to go outside and play.In his free time he loved to read books and play his favorite game: ROBLOX®. His friends love to play the game with him, but mostly his very good friend Drax, plays ROBLOX with him the most. Mainly Quenchar plays Elemental Battlegrounds® with Drax. Quencher was often scolded for spending too much time on the game. Quenchar had lost his father 5 years ago due to cancer, he lived in a house with his Mom and two elder sisters, Jemma who was 16 years old and was in the 10th grade, and Jane who was 17 years old and was in the 12th grade.  Academically Quenchar was miles ahead of his grade. His favorite subjects weremath’s and Physics. He had won many prizes for Physics and math’s competition. One of the things Quenchar loved to do was sing.His preferred genre of song to sing was hip hop songs. Usually in the mornings Quenchar used to go to his boom box and playhis favorite song. Today Quenchar did not feel to sing, but he was eager to play ROBLOX®.

Quenchar dragged himself from the ground and he on is feet. Quenchar stretched and cracked his back knuckles. He was ready to brush his teeth, eat his breakfast and play ROBLOX®.

“Quenchar, Your breakfast is ready!” his mom yelled 

“Coming, let me brush my teeth!” said Quenchar yelling back

Quenchar glared at the calendar which was in front of his bed. It was a Saturday 
He seemed pretty happy about it, He rushed to the bathroom and grabbed 
His tooth brush and took the tooth paste. Quenchar squeezed it but it went all 
over the mirror 

“Oh great” Quenchar groaned

He ran outside of his room and creeped into his elder sisters room.

“Okay, this is one of the world’s dangerous missions” said Quenchar.

He looked at the door knob, and reached for it as he slowly turned it he leaned 
towards the wall and the door swung open. Quenchar took a peek inside the room, it was pitch black,he tip-toed on the bright polished wooden floor trying not make a noise. He managed to reach for the bathroom handle, at the same time someone stepped out of bed. He grabbed the tooth paste

“Mission accomplished” Quenchar said with a smile

Quenchar turned around and was about to get out of the bathroom but the 
door opened. It was the moment of truth and Quenchar hid behind the curtains of the bathtub. It was his sister Jane and she was looking for the tooth paste 

“What the-?” said Jane confusingly 

“Jemma, have you seen the tooth paste?” said Jane calling out to her younger sister 

 “Okay, now I need to get out of here.” thought Quenchar 
The moment Jane and Jemma were arguing Quenchar made a run for it to his room. Quenchar successfully reached his room and brushed his teeth.





Chapter 2: Hey! I Got News For You!
“Hey Quenchar” Said a voice
“Ghaaa!” screamed Quenchar in fear, but when Quenchar turned around. It was his best friend Drax Johnson “My god, Drax.” “Don’t ever scare me like that, ever again!” saidQuenchar as he yelled at Drax
“Okay” Drax said simply. “I’ve got some news for you”
The two boys sat on Quenchar’s bed,and were discussing about the news that Drax was going share with Quenchar.
“Okay, now.” “You are going to listen to this ‘Amazing’ news” “There is this event called “The Sacred Voice” it is related to singing and you, Quenchar.T.Jaxson loves singing and I think it would be a great idea for you to sign up for this event.” Said Drax with excitement.
“Okay, what do I get if I win?” Quenchar asked Drax
“Can you handle it?” Drax asked Quenchar
“You are talking to Quenchar.T.Jaxson, I can practically handle anything” Quenchar said bravely
“Okay, then.” “One million dollars” said Drax
Quenchar almost fainted sputtering out word, as he was trying to speak. He was lying on the bed with a smile!
“One million dollars!” “Oh my gosh. This is just exciting!” exclaimed Quechar
“If you want that money, you need to go to Comic Man’s ® Comic House and sign up for this event. Remember this happens once in every 4 years ®” shouted Drax
The boys ran down stairs skipping them in 2’s, they ran to the garage grabbed their bikes and started to cycle to Comic House®. Comic House® was in the middle of Quenchar’s neighborhood; the lucky thing is that it is in the last stretch of 12th Westlock Street. It was where Quenchar’s house was. It took them a while because there was traffic in the cycling road. When the traffic cleared Quenchar was looking at the most beautiful sun set he has ever seen. He sped up to Drax and started blabbering
“Do you think I may win?” Quenchar asked Drax
“Well it depends, this competition is worldwide.” “You are first going to compete in regionals, then you will go to nationals and internationals, if you win in internationals you get the money and a big trophy, autographs a t-shirt maybe a sponsor too.” Drax explained to Quenchar
“Oh, that is amazing” Quenchar said with a gulp
“What if I tie with someone?” Quenchar asked Drax
“If you tie with someone, you are going to go to the original Comic House® which I think is in India, and you are going to have a death match with the person who you tied up with.” “I think the theme for the death match is rapping, I don’t know so don’t trust me with the theme thing that I said” Drax replied
The two boys cycled along the traffic free cycling road and saw the newly refurbished Comic House®
“OMG!” “It has changed, it has become bigger!” Quenchar said excitedly
“Nice work Comic Man®!” Drax said with smile
The boys observed a very long Que. When they looked at the front it said ‘The Sacred Voice sign up’. Quenchar looked very grumpy. The Que was so long that it would have taken 4 years for him to sign up and the competition would just fly away in front of his eyes. The Que contained people of different ages, height and weight. Quenchar always hated to stand in lines because he had no patience 
“You have got to be kidding me!” Quenchar said in an anxious voice. They ran to the desk which says ‘They Sacred Voice sign up’
“Uhh…excuse me lady is this the-“
“Yes it is boy, now get in line if you want to sign up” the clerk lady said interrupting Quenchar
“But” Quenchar sputtered
“Get in line now child or I will call security”
He looked back and saw a big Que going all the way inside of Westlock Public Park. Quenchar looked down on the ground and walked back to his cycle as if he lost all hope. Drax did his best to cheer him up but it did not work and stop trying. Quenchar walked in the house, he did not want to play ROBLOX, and he did not want to sing. He passed the evening doing nothing. He also returned the toothpaste to his sister’s room. Later in the evening Quenchar had his dinner without making a noise and went to bed very sadly


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Chapter3: The Sadness Rages

It was a sad Sunday morning. Quenchar was living the event what happed yesterday. He felt that he was in a time loop. Living and re-living that moment again and again. Quenchar felt devastated. He was sitting down on the dining table and he was eating favorite cereal.
“Hey, Quenchar!” said his older sister Jemma
 “Why are you making such a long face” she said trying to imitate the long face Quenchar was making.
 Quenchar did not really like his sister Jemma. His sister Jemma loved to annoy him, his oldest sister (older than Jemma) Jane, treated Quenchar properly and didn’t trouble much.
“Stop it, brainless baboon” Quenchar snapped at Jemma
“Oh, you are going to take that back!” Jemma said to Quenchar with a yell
“Oh my, I am so scared of Jemma” said Quenchar teasing Jemma
“Make me” said Quenchar again
“That’s it-“said Jemmastomping towards Quenchar. Fortunately their mom saw what was going and stopped it from getting worse.
“Hey, what is going on here?” Their mom yelled at both of them
“She started it” said Quenchar pointed to Jemma
“M-Me how-“Jemma sputtered
“Stop it Jemma.” “I don’t want to hear it” “You are supposed to take care of your little brother and not fight with him!” said their mom increasing her tone at the end of her sentence.
“Okay fine” Jemma said as she stomped her way to her room
As Jemma was going to here room she took her finger and sliced her neck making a noiseand pointing it to Quenchar.He just ignored it.
“Okay” mom said“Drax told me about the singing event and he sent me this” said his mom as she pushed a piece of paper towards Quenchar. He was looking at the small piece of paper without any interest but something caught his eye, Quenchar saw this on the other side of the small sheet. The paper said“Lucky Scratch Card’under that it said“The Sacred Voice event”. Quenchar saw a small paragraph 
“This card contains a very lucky chance for you to get straight to The Sacred Voice stadium register. You’ll personally meet the judges and head straight to the Comic Center®, your name will be on the leaderboard. Good luck” said Quenchar reading out loud from the piece of paper.
“I mean-This is-Oh my-“said Quenchar trying to find words so he could speak
Quenchar felt a lot of happiness rushing through his body. He finally felt his way out of the maze, but it was not enough. He knew that it was all based on his luck to get in. Quenchar was just ignoring the fact he might not get through and thought positive. Quenchar had lost his train of thought as he heard his mom talking to him. “I know, how about you get Drax, thank him and head to Comic House “said mom
“Okay mom, bye love you”





Chapter 4: The Extraordinary “Thanks”
Quenchar took his bike from the garage and cycled as fast as he could go. So he could stop at Drax’s house and thank him about The Scratch Card for The Sacred Voice event.
 On the way Quenchar saw the amazing view of the Drax’s neighborhood which was at the bottom of the hill. Quenchar cycled downhill, he felt the wind go through his hair and he felt that he could fly because the speed at which he was going was pretty fast. Drax’s neighborhood is quite humongous; the neighborhood covers 730 acers of land. This would have taken a lot of time to reach but Drax lived right in front from where his neighborhood started. Drax lived in a street named: Whemy Whimlock Street, this always made Quenchar laugh. He peddled his way through the pavement trying not to hurt anyone and he finally reached Drax’s house.
Drax has a big house. In Drax’s house there are 5 bedrooms, 2 big servant rooms, a very big backyard which has a swimming pool and a huge front yard.  Drax uses one of the servant rooms as his conference room, in that room there was a long table which had 4 chairs and a projector.
“Drax, can you come out please? Quenchar yelled.
Drax’s mother opend the front door from the living room balcony and said:
“Hi Quenchar, how are you doing”
“I’m doing fine Mrs. Johnson; can Drax come out to play?” asked Quenchar
“Oh, you boys want to go to Comic House®?” asked Mrs. Johnson
“Yes” said Quenchar
“Okay, come in while I bring him to you and you boys can decide what to do and where you want to go” said Mrs. Johnson
Quenchar walked into their house and admiringly looked around. He saw how big their house was; Drax walked down the stairs happily and saw Quenchar
“Hey Quenchar, what’s up” asked Drax
“Well of course the celling, but thank you so much for giving this to me” said Quenchar with a smile on his face
“Have you opend it?” asked Drax
Quenchar shook his head and said
“I want to open it with you”
“All righty lets go to our conference room.” Said Drax escorting Quenchar to their big backyard
“Okay, let us get started”
“Quenchar, this is right now depending on your luck and if you don’t get in you are going to stand in line to get through” said Drax
“Okay” said Quenchar
He took his finger nail and scratched the silver part and saw this:
“You’re In Congratulations”
“Oh my gosh I’m through”
“Great going buddy” said Drax
“This requires a celebration!” shouted Quenchar happily!
Quenchar had never felt so happy, and he had found his way out of the maze. Quenchar thought that this is the whole world to him. Now I need to practice like I never did before thought Quenchar. 





Chapter 5: Rehearsal Time
Quenchar was delighted that he got selected, and he just couldn’t stop thinking about it. He cycled uphill until he passed a neighborhood called Mid-Point. Quencher got tired because from Mid-Point to Frenzical (another neighborhood) the hill got very steep. He decided to walk with his bike until he passed Frenzical. It was 10:55 AM when Quenchar got home. He realized something smelled good at his house; the smell of the house was different. It smelled of a baked cake.
“Mom?” “Have you baked something?” Quenchar asked his mom expecting a reply
“Yes, I have.” “I have baked your favorite cake” said his mom’
Quenchar had a huge smile on his face. He loved his mom’s homemade cake. Quenchar remembered on his 5th birthday just a year before his dad died, his mom made this cake for the first time and it made him really happy.
“Thanks mom for baking this cake for me” said Quenchar
Quenchar’s mom smiled at him
“Well, I got good news” said Quenchar
“You’re in!?” exclaimed his mom
Quenchar nodded
“OMG” “This is amazing!” “You’re in” said his mom in excitement
“I’m going to go and meet the judges, okay” said Quenchar
“Okay, go now” “Do you want me to come?” asked his mom
“No, no need.” “I’ll go by myself” said Quenchar


Quenchar did not feel to take his bike to Comic House® and decided to walk. Since he wanted to avoid the crowd in front of his neighborhood’s mall named ‘Crowdex Mall’ because of the huge discount of 75% off in a few shops. He had to go through the woods as a short cut, Quenchar dislike the woods a lot because it creeps him out. He had no choice since it was a short route to Comic House® which leads him to the Ordlexo National Park where he can walk easily to Comic House®.
 Quenchar felt really excited about meeting the judges and he felt that they were going to like his spirit and let him win the million dollars itself but that is not possible because there might be a better singer than him which is like one in a million. He finally reached Ordlexo National Park where he could see the big Comic House® comic mall. The big mall was well decorated with neon’s and a big sign saying ‘The Sacred Voice’. Quenchar noticed a small reading next to the big writing; he couldn’t read it because he was standing too far. As Quenchar moved towards Comic House® he read the paragraph, ‘This event happens once in four years. To be voted as ‘The Voice Of The World’ you need to bring out the most unique part of yourselfand let the world know who the best singer was. You can also win a title named as ‘Magic’ for most upcoming talent. The title ‘The Singing Impediment’ for your disabilities or larynx infection, 500 thousand dollars will be given to you if you have won this title. ‘The Rookie’ this title is the second best singer in ‘The Sacred Voice’ event. Quenchar seemed very impressed about the competition as he walked in the Comic House® ‘The Sacred Voice’ event
Quenchar went and met the judges. He saw 4 judges standing together. He was eves dropping on the last person who was here and they just plainly say hi and introduce them self like they were programmed to do that only. Quenchar walked in front and looked at all 4 and guessing that they were going to do the same thing, it turned out Quenchar was right
“Hi, I am Nattie” said one of the judges
“Hello, I am Shlock” said the judge standing next to Nattie
“Hello there, my name is Trafaquer” said the judge standing up straight like he was saluting the flag of Ordlexo next to Nattie
“Hi, I’m Julie” said the judge standing next to Trafaquer
“Hi I am Quenchar” said Quenchar with a faint smile
“Wow, that is such a unique name and it sounds really nice” said Nattie
“Quenchar, huh, nice name buddy” complimented Trafaquer
“Thanks” said Quenchar putting his hand behind his head
“Well, welcome to the show” said Julie
“Oh, I know I am saying this again, keep practicing”
“Sure thing” replied Quenchar

Quenchar has been practicing for days. Sometimes he sang too loud and other times he sang to soft. This time he sung very loud so loud that his mom had to personally come to his room and zip it up
“Okay, honeys please do not sing that loud please.”
“Sure thing mom” said Quenchar
Quenchar continued to practice to sing because he wanted to win those one million dollars fair and square.









Chapter 6: The Time Has Come
It was time and Quenchar was dressed up for his show. Quenchar was wearing jeans, a black T-shirt with a bowtie and a pitch black polished Jimmy Gorickson shoes. Quenchar was going to sing in front more than 1500 people and the whole of Ordlexo would be watching him. He just realized that his throat was paining.Oh no Quenchar thought to himself, this was not supposed to happen now. Quenchar practically had his heart in his mouth panicking saying:
“Oh god no!” “This is wrong!” “This is not supposed to happen now!” “Go away you useless pain in the throat”
As the pain in the throat was still there, Quenchar went downstairs and poured hot water in a glass mixed with turmeric and salt. Quenchar looked around to see if anybody was watching him and speed walked into the bathroom to gargle with the mixtureof water that he was holding in his hand to try and calm down the swelling. He looked at the bathroom mirror and shook his head in shame, thinking that he should have been more careful when he was rehearsing.
“Quenchar we have to go!” “Come on before the traffic hits the road” said his mom
“Oh, Quenchar I have to drop Jane and Jemma at their friend’s houses for the night, luckily it’s on the way”
The Jaxson’s ran to the car and their mom hit the gas. Quenchar thought that he is going to fail and rather not sing and just flee the competition. Since they were already on the road there was no turning back.
Comic House® was really packed. There were people all over the place, Quenchar felt really scared and his heart was racing. He felt like jumping into a volcano. Quenchar could feel his body burn as he could imagen himself jumping into a volcano. Quenchar thought that it was a bit too brutal to imagen himself burn and just stopped to think about him burning in molten rocks.
“Okay sweetie” “You are going to go in there and show who really is boss” said his mom with a smile.
When Quenchar walked in Comic House® and felt the cold windy A/C breeze coming onto his head and chest. He looked around the place and the most common thing he could see was people. Everywhere he looked at there were only people.
Quenchar walked through two big doors which had a curve at the top. It was like he was walking inside a big carnival at an English auditorium. He and his mom had split up because she was not a contestant. Quenchar was still panicking. He was waiting patiently and realized he can’t run from participation. He had to go and face his fear and everybody is going to be watching him. The one thing Quenchar hoped that they will not make a meme out of his singing and his voice.
“Hey” “Buddy, you’re going next” addressed one of the back stage members.
“Okay, thanks” said Quenchar flatting his shirt and correcting his bowtie, okay here it goes. Quenchar walked on stage looking at the ground, out of the corner of his eyes he saw how massive the crowd was.
“Okay, let’s see what you got”
 said the judgesQuenchar realized that he can’t sing with the problem he has got with his larynx, and he decided to walk out of stage and just go home, when he was just about to leave, he thought that leaving would not do any good forhim. With his courage and confidence he pulled himself up and walked right back on to stage and he was ready. He realized that this competition was not about winning that one million dollars, it’s about finding the key to the lock, so that you could see more, do more, read more, and most of all,‘Be more’. “I’m ready” said Quenchar
“All righty, here we go. This is the music. Now just sing” said Shlock
Quenchar gave his best and he just hummed and tried his best to sing, the moment the song was over he walked off stage. Even though his voice was cracking. Quenchar could not feel anything. He felt hollow, he felt that his soul had disintegrated and his mind was perished.




Chapter7: The Exceptional Ending
It was a fine Monday morning. There was no school due to an event which was taking place at his school called theMulti-Achieving Scholars Cap. Quenchar seemed really joyous that he did not have to go for the event. He woke up normally. He just got up stretched and. It took him a while to notice some big card on his table. He tried to read it with his strained eyes, ‘Congratulation. You have not won the million dollars but you have won 500 thousand dollars and the title ‘The Singing Impediment’ of the season. We hope you continue singing after your discovery of your disability or infection. Get well soon Quenchar was just very happy that he did it; he went on stage and gave it the best he could have givenwith that larynx. Well we all have happy endings thought Quenchar, but he felt this one as a stupendous ending.

THE END



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